Do you love writing?
Have you wrote a story like this before?
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kamusta Love! I like reading your 100 word count. Maybe next time Use different words instead of using "I" at the start of what your writing. I have wrote story about this but it was different from yours. You have a nice 100 word count story. Bye Love have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteI would love to read what happens next Love.
ReplyDeleteI hope that you write about the next place you are going too.You have a great imagination and I look forward to reading more of your writing.
Maybe you could tell us about the place where you never get seen again,in your next post.