here is my Story
have you ever done a narrative?have you seen a narrative?
thank you for reading my blog post.
Have a great day
Friday, June 5, 2020
My Narrative writing
Bonjour everyone, This term we have been writing a narrative. It was about a spy but I don't really think that. I just think he was photographer trying to take some photos. We started our stories just with a picture of what he was doing. My story was about a man named "Donald". He was a photographer and he loved to take photos.
here is my Story
have you ever done a narrative?
have you seen a narrative?
thank you for reading my blog post.
Have a great day
here is my Story
have you ever done a narrative?have you seen a narrative?
thank you for reading my blog post.
Have a great day
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ReplyDeleteOh my Best friend! You really did more writing than me! You did I incredible narrator writing. It like a long movie! I loved the way you been putting in punctuation! I bet Mrs Scott should be really proud! I have a thing to say.. I thought Donald was Donald Trump LOL. Anyways I love your writing, have a great day!
ReplyDeleteHello Santannah,I Loved how you actually read my narrative,Because it was really long. But maybe you can make your writing more appropriate. thank you for reading my blog post Santanna.
DeleteOops Sorry If I delete it LOL
ReplyDeleteHello Love, My name is Dwane I think your really good at making a narrative. I love the name of your character. And you did a great job on your blog post keep up the good work. Did you get help from anyone?
ReplyDeleteWhen I was reading your work Love,I got a bit lost.You have lots of ideas,which is great,but to me,the ideas don't flow into each other.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time,you could write a bit less,and then concentrate on making it flow.
Well done though for getting so much writing done.😊