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Friday, September 20, 2019

persuasive writing

hi Readers, my class has been writing persuasive writing and we have been writing  a letter to a Seamus  the Leprechaun he wrote me a letter too here is the letter I wrote him.

2 comments:

  1. Hi love its Kelis.
    I like you writing about Seamus.
    I also did a letter to Seamus as well
    How long did this take you??
    Maybe next time you could write a little bit more

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  2. Hello Love its Jade I really like the way you did you Seamus writing I really like it but maybe next time you need capital letters at the start of every sentence.

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