I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, September 20, 2019
persuasive writing
hi Readers, my class has been writing persuasive writing and we have been writing a letter to a Seamus the Leprechaun he wrote me a letter too here is the letter I wrote him.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi love its Kelis.
ReplyDeleteI like you writing about Seamus.
I also did a letter to Seamus as well
How long did this take you??
Maybe next time you could write a little bit more
Hello Love its Jade I really like the way you did you Seamus writing I really like it but maybe next time you need capital letters at the start of every sentence.
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